Showing posts with label juxtaposition. Show all posts
Showing posts with label juxtaposition. Show all posts

Tuesday, May 26, 2026

To the Lighthouse: Ghost Imagery

Ghost imagery captures the instant after action disappears, emphasizing what lingers rather than what occurred. It evokes absence through residual cues—sound, motion, light, and atmosphere—forcing the reader to perceive the aftermath instead of the event itself.

For example:

empty basketball court
the faint sound of a swaying net 
in smoky twilight

In this haiku, L 1, “empty basketball court,” frames a space stripped of action, while L 2 preserves its echo through the lingering movement of the net. L 3, “in smoky twilight,” completes the ghost imagery by visually diffusing the scene. Smoke softens the edges of perception while twilight dissolves clarity itself. Together, they create an atmosphere of dispersal and aftermath. The emptiness feels consequential, as though something vital has only just vanished from view.


Another example:

her side of the bed
a hollow still visible
in moonlit dust

L 1, “her side of the bed,” establishes both a physical location and a human absence. The phrase creates a negative space: a territory defined entirely by someone who is no longer there, yet remains structurally central to the scene.

Ls  2 & 3 function together as a single perceptual mechanism: “a hollow still visible / in moonlit dust.” Here, “a hollow” is not an object, but a residual form—a shape created through subtraction. The mattress indentation is never directly described; instead, its existence is inferred through the way the surrounding space behaves.

The phrase “moonlit dust” becomes the medium through which absence is rendered visible. Rather than illuminating solid surfaces, the moonlight catches suspended particles, briefly revealing an otherwise invisible geometry. The drifting dust gives texture to emptiness itself.

The result is not the depiction of a memory, but the materialization of absence. The “ghost” is not a phantom figure, but the way empty space remains momentarily structured by what has just left it.


Added:

moonlit playground
swing chains sway in the echo
of far laughter


Added:

winter fishing pier
the slow knock of loose ropes
against pilings


Added:

empty bus stop 
the flutter of a ticket
in streetlamp light


Added:

vacant alley court
the backboard shining
in police lights


Added:

closed dog park
one tennis ball rolling back
through bloodied leaves


Added:

carnival grounds
ticket stubs against the fence
in misty rain

Saturday, November 15, 2014

Poetic Musings: Found Haiku by Allen Ginsberg

Ginsberg’s gaps between the nouns (which he terms “ellipses”) are analogous to the white spaces and juxtapositions between colors in Cézanne’s paintings.
-- Brian Jackson, "Modernist Looking: Surreal Impressions in the Poetry of Allen Ginsberg"


winter midnight streetlight smalltown rain

(found haiku in Part I, "Howl:"
who jumped in limousines with the Chinaman of Oklahoma on the impulse of winter
midnight streetlight smalltown rain,)

Allen Ginsberg


Commentary:

Interviewer: You once mentioned something you had found in Cézanne—a remark about the reconstitution of the petites sensations of experience, in his own painting—and you compared this with the method of your poetry.

Ginsberg: ...The last part of “Howl” was really an homage to art but also in specific terms an homage to Cézanne’s method, in a sense I adapted what I could to writing; but that’s a very complicated matter to explain. Except, putting it very simply, that just as Cézanne doesn’t use perspective lines to create space, but it’s a juxtaposition of one color against another color (that’s one element of his space), so, I had the idea, perhaps overrefined, that by the unexplainable, unexplained nonperspective line, that is, juxtaposition of one word against another, a gap between the two words—like the space gap in the canvas—there’d be a gap between the two words that the mind would fill in with the sensation of existence...

So, I was trying to do similar things with juxtapositions like “hydrogen jukebox.” Or ... [winter midnight streetlight smalltown rain]. Instead of cubes and squares and triangles. Cézanne is reconstituting by means of triangles, cubes, and colors—I have to reconstitute by means of words, rhythms of course, and all that—but say it’s words, phrasings...

... the idea that I had was that gaps in space and time through images juxtaposed, just as in the haiku you get two images that the mind connects in a flash, and so that flash is the petite sensation; or the satori, perhaps, that the Zen haikuists would speak of—if they speak of it like that...

-- excerpted from the Allen Ginsberg interview by Thomas Clark ("Allen Ginsberg, The Art of Poetry, No. 8," Paris Review, 37, Spring 1966)


Ginsberg recognized that Cézanne’s technique revealed the moment when the eye engaged spatial relationships between objects, discerning form (or finding their “true value,” as Williams would term it), which Cézanne would render as a juxtaposition between colors. Cézanne’s color juxtapositions, as well as the gaps of white canvas between the colors, capture a moment of heightened perception. In other words, the interstices between the forms created by color represent the petites sensations (Ginsberg’s “sensation of existence”) that the eye perceives as a result of looking consecutively and simultaneously. Ginsberg sought to incorporate into his poetry Cézanne’s juxtapositional approach: “So, I was trying to do similar things with juxtapositions  like ‘hydrogen jukebox.’ Or . . . [winter midnight streetlight smalltown rain]. Instead of cubes and squares and triangles. [. . .] I have to reconstitute by means of words [. . . and] phrasings” (Spontaneous Mind, 30–31). Thus, Ginsberg’s gaps between the nouns (which he terms “ellipses”) are analogous to the white spaces and juxtapositions between colors in Cézanne’s paintings.

For Cézanne as well as Ginsberg, the gaps and juxtapositions represent the moment of perceiving an underlying order and structure of quasi-religious significance. Such a moment originates from closely attending to the process by which the eye and mind make sense of perceptual data.

-- excerpted from Brian Jackson's essay, titled "Modernist Looking: Surreal Impressions in the Poetry of Allen Ginsberg," Texas Studies in Literature and Language, 52:3, Fall 2010, p. 304


Note: For more information about  Allen Ginsberg's view of haiku, see Dark Wings of Night: Allen Ginsberg's View of Juxtaposition and His Haiku


Selected Haiku by Allen Ginsberg

Against red bark trunk
A fly's shadow
lights on the shadow of a pine bough.

Selected Poems 1947-1995

In the half-light of dawn a few birds warble under the Pleiades.

Selected Poems 1947-1995

A frog floating
in the drugstore jar:
summer rain on grey pavements.
(after Shiki)

Journals, Mid Fifties 1954-1958

The moon over the roof,
worms in the garden.
I rent this house.

Journals, Mid Fifties 1954-1958

Friday, July 18, 2014

Dark Wings of the Night: Allen Ginsberg's View of Juxtaposition and His Haiku

INTERVIEWER

You once mentioned something you had found in Cézanne—a remark about the reconstitution of the petites sensations of experience, in his own painting—and you compared this with the method of your poetry.

GINSBERG

...The last part of “Howl” was really an homage to art but also in specific terms an homage to Cézanne’s method, in a sense I adapted what I could to writing; but that’s a very complicated matter to explain. Except, putting it very simply, that just as Cézanne doesn’t use perspective lines to create space, but it’s a juxtaposition of one color against another color (that’s one element of his space), so, I had the idea, perhaps overrefined, that by the unexplainable, unexplained nonperspective line, that is, juxtaposition of one word against another, a gap between the two words—like the space gap in the canvas—there’d be a gap between the two words that the mind would fill in with the sensation of existence. In other words when I say, oh ... when Shakespeare says, In the dread vast and middle of the night, something happens between “dread vast” and “middle.” That creates like a whole space of—spaciness of black night. How it gets that is very odd, those words put together. Or in the haiku, you have two distinct images, set side by side without drawing a connection, without drawing a logical connection between them: the mind fills in this ... this space. Like

   O ant
         crawl up Mount Fujiyama,
                but slowly, slowly.

Now you have the small ant and you have Mount Fujiyama and you have the slowly, slowly, and what happens is that you feel almost like ... a cock in your mouth! You feel this enormous space—universe, it’s almost a tactile thing. Well anyway, it’s a phenomenon-sensation, phenomenon hyphen sensation, that’s created by this little haiku of Issa, for instance.

So, I was trying to do similar things with juxtapositions like “hydrogen jukebox.” Or ... [winter midnight streetlight smalltown rain]. Instead of cubes and squares and triangles. Cézanne is reconstituting by means of triangles, cubes, and colors—I have to reconstitute by means of words, rhythms of course, and all that—but say it’s words, phrasings. So. The problem is then to reach the different parts of the mind, that are existing simultaneously, the different associations which are going on simultaneously, choosing elements from both, like jazz, jukebox, and all that, and we have the jukebox from that; politics, hydrogen bomb, and we have the hydrogen of that—you see “hydrogen jukebox.” And that actually compresses in one instant like a whole series of things. Or the end of Sunflower with “cunts of wheelbarrows,” whatever that all meant, or “rubber dollar bills”—“skin of machinery”; see, and actually in the moment of composition I don’t necessarily know what it means, but it comes to mean something later, after a year or two, I realize that it meant something clear, unconsciously. Which takes on meaning in time, like a photograph developing slowly. Because we’re not really always conscious of the entire depth of our minds, in other words we just know a lot more than we’re able to be aware of, normally—though at moments we’re completely aware, I guess...

... the idea that I had was that gaps in space and time through images juxtaposed, just as in the haiku you get two images that the mind connects in a flash, and so that flash is the petite sensation; or the satori, perhaps, that the Zen haikuists would speak of—if they speak of it like that.

-- excerpted from the Allen Ginsberg interview by Thomas Clark ("Allen Ginsberg, The Art of Poetry No. 8," Paris Review, 37, Spring 1966)


Cézanne doesn’t use perspective lines to create space but it’s a juxtaposition of one color against another color [. . .] so, I had the idea[of the] juxtaposition of one word against another, a gap between the two words -- like the space gap in the canvas -- there’d be a gap between the two words which the mind would fill in with the sensation of existence.

Ginsberg recognized that Cézanne’s technique revealed the moment when the eye engaged spatial relationships between objects, discerning form (or finding their “true value,” as Williams would term it), which Cézanne would render as a juxtaposition between colors. Cézanne’s color juxtapositions, as well as the gaps of white canvas between the colors, capture a moment of heightened perception. In other words, the interstices between the forms created by color represent the petites sensations (Ginsberg’s “sensation of existence”) that the eye perceives as a result of looking consecutively and simultaneously. Ginsberg sought to incorporate into his poetry Cézanne’s juxtapositional approach: “So, I was trying to do similar things with juxtapositions  like ‘hydrogen jukebox.’ Or . . . [winter midnight streetlight smalltown rain]. Instead of cubes and squares and triangles. [. . .] I have to reconstitute by means of words [. . . and] phrasings” (Spontaneous Mind30–31). Thus, Ginsberg’s gaps between the nouns (which he terms “ellipses”) are analogous to the white spaces and juxtapositions between colors in Cézanne’s paintings.

For Cézanne as well as Ginsberg, the gaps and juxtapositions represent the moment of perceiving an underlying order and structure of quasi-religious significance. Such a moment originates from closely attending to the process by which the eye and mind make sense of perceptual data.

-- excerpted from Brian Jackson's essay, titled "Modernist Looking: Surreal Impressions in the Poetry of Allen Ginsberg," Texas Studies in Literature and Language, 52:3, Fall 2010, p. 304 


... the idea that I had was that gaps in space and time through images juxtaposed, just as in the haiku you get two images that the mind connects in a flash, and so that flash is the petite sensation; or the satori, perhaps, that the Zen haikuists would speak of—if they speak of it like that.

For more information about the use of juxtaposition in haiku composition, see Chapter 4, titled “The Art of Juxtaposition: Cutting and Joining,” of Traces of Dreams Traces of Dreams Landscape, Cultural Memory, and the Poetry of Basho by Haruo Shirane, a chapter that “examines the dynamics of textual juxtaposition and the different kinds of links -- homophonic, metonymic, and metaphoric -- that lies at the heart of Basho's haikai” (pp. 23-4), and  my "To the Lighthouse" post, titled  "Cutting through Time and Space ."


Selected Haiku:

The master
emerges from the movies:
the silent street

I don’t know the names
of the flowers – now
my garden is gone

winter midnight streetlight smalltown rain
(found haiku in  "Howl," Part I)