a lingering cold
left in the dark room
memorial candles
Bruce Ross
Chinese Translation (Traditional)
揮之不去的感冒
留在黑暗房間內
的追悼蠟燭
Chinese Translation (Simplified)
挥之不去的感冒
留在黑暗房间内
的追悼蜡烛
Bio Sketch
Bruce Ross is editor of Haiku Moment, An Anthology of Contemporary North American Haiku and main editor of the forthcoming A Vast Sky, An Anthology of Contemporary World Haiku.
This haiku is tightly structured with a deep emotional undercurrent. The well-chosen phrases, "lingering cold," "dark room," and "memorial candles," enhance the tone and mood of the poem.
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