geese unzip the sky
a snowflake trembles
on your eyelashes
VerseWrights, 2013
Debbie Strange
Chinese Translation (Traditional)
一群鵝打開天空
在你的睫毛上
雪花顫動
Chinese Translation (Simplified)
一群鹅打开天空
在你的睫毛上
雪花颤动
Bio Sketch
Debbie
Strange belongs to the Writers' Collective of Manitoba and several
haiku and tanka organizations. Her writing has received awards and been
published in numerous journals. She is a singer-songwriter and
photographer whose photographs have been published and exhibited. She
is currently assembling a haiga collection. Visit her on twitter
@Debbie_Strange
Debbie's use of the zoom-in technique is effective, and the contrasts between the two parts of the poem open up an interpretative space that allows the reader to co-author the poem.
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