the rippling surface
of an old pond
Notes:
1 For more information about Basho's frog haiku, see
a) Poetic Musings: Generic Analysis of Basho’s Frog Haiku (written from the perspective of kigo, "season word," and first published in Magnapoets, 7,January 2011) and
b) To the Lighthouse: Cutting through Time and Space (written from the perspective of kire, "cutting")
2 Below are some of the frog haiku I've written over four years in response to Basho's frog haiku or to the comments on Basho's frog haiku:
moonlit pond ...
the sound of water brings
news of a dead frog
(for Onishi Yasuyo)
Honourable Mention (Shintai), World Haiku Review, March 2013
lotus pond ...
all that remains
of frog song
NeverEnding Story, April 18, 2013
frog pond ...
the weight of a shadow
on the lotus leaf
PoemHunter, Feb. 1, 2013
rippling pond ...
what's left
of his words
The Heron's Nest, 16:4, December 2012
starry pond
the pulsing throat
of a frog
Editor's Choice Haiku, Pond Life Thread of Sketchbook, 7:2, March/April 2012
moonlit pond...
a frog jumps
from star to star
Haiku Pix review, 4, Fall 2011
moonlit pond...
a frog penetrates
itself
Simply Haiku, 9:2, Summer 2011
2 Below are some of the frog haiku I've written over four years in response to Basho's frog haiku or to the comments on Basho's frog haiku:
moonlit pond ...
the sound of water brings
news of a dead frog
(for Onishi Yasuyo)
Honourable Mention (Shintai), World Haiku Review, March 2013
lotus pond ...
all that remains
of frog song
NeverEnding Story, April 18, 2013
frog pond ...
the weight of a shadow
on the lotus leaf
PoemHunter, Feb. 1, 2013
rippling pond ...
what's left
of his words
The Heron's Nest, 16:4, December 2012
starry pond
the pulsing throat
of a frog
Editor's Choice Haiku, Pond Life Thread of Sketchbook, 7:2, March/April 2012
moonlit pond...
a frog jumps
from star to star
Haiku Pix review, 4, Fall 2011
moonlit pond...
a frog penetrates
itself
Simply Haiku, 9:2, Summer 2011
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