beach date...
a hermit crab deeper
inside its shell
Rebecca Drouilhet
Chinese Translation (Traditional)
沙灘約會 ...
寄居蟹更進一步地
縮在它的殼內
Chinese Translation (Simplified)
沙滩约会 ...
寄居蟹更进一步地
缩在它的壳内
Bio Sketch
Rebecca
Drouilhet is a 59-year-old retired registered nurse. Her haiku and
tanka have appeared in numerous print and electronic journals. In 2012,
she won a Sakura award in the Vancouver Cherry Blossom Festival Haiku
Invitational. She and her husband, Robert Michael Drouilhet have
written a book of haiku titled Lighting a Path
The thematic turn the poem takes in Ls 2&3 enhances not only the visual aspect but also the "hai" aspect of the poem.
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