goodbye kiss
the setting sun lengthens
our shadows
Cattails, January 2015
Maria Tomczak
Chinese Translation (Traditional)
吻別
夕陽延長了
我們的影子
Chinese Translation (Simplified)
吻别
夕阳延长了
我们的影子
Bio Sketch
Maria
Tomczak lives in Opole, Poland. She enjoys writing haiku, poems and
short stories. As a mother she also writes fairy tales for her son. She
is interested in Japanese culture and poetry, especially haiku and
related forms.
L1 establishes the theme while the riveting image of the lengthening shadows at sunset in Ls 2&3 enhances the tone and mood of the poem.
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