Sunday, February 21, 2016

Butterfly Dream: Goodbye Kiss Haiku by Maria Tomczak

English Original

goodbye kiss
the setting sun lengthens
our shadows

Cattails, January 2015

Maria Tomczak


Chinese Translation (Traditional)

吻別
夕陽延長了
我們的影子

Chinese Translation (Simplified)

吻别
夕阳延长了
我们的影子


Bio Sketch

Maria Tomczak lives in Opole, Poland. She enjoys writing haiku, poems and short stories. As a mother she also writes fairy tales for her son. She is interested in Japanese culture and poetry, especially haiku and related forms.

1 comment:

  1. L1 establishes the theme while the riveting image of the lengthening shadows at sunset in Ls 2&3 enhances the tone and mood of the poem.

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