he offers
to carry my skis
up the slope ...
snowflakes melting
on my tongue
Anne Curran
Chinese Translation (Traditional)
他提議幫忙
攜帶我的滑雪板
上坡 ...
在我的舌頭上
雪花融化了
Chinese Translation (Simplified)
他提议帮忙
携带我的滑雪板
上坡 ...
在我的舌头上
雪花融化了
Bio Sketch
Anne Curran is a Japanese verse
form poet who has been writing verse for the last three to four years in
Hamilton, New Zealand. She has been helped along this journey by
lovely, like-minded collaborators: poets, editors, and friends.
Combined with the heartwarming statement in Ls 1-3, the simple yet visually evocative image of Ls 4&5 adds emotional impact to the poem.
ReplyDeleteDear Anne,
ReplyDeleteWhat a delightful view of young love. Congratulations on being published at Chen-ou's beautiful journal.
Blessings,
Karen