train journey
each one of us
a hula doll
Acorn, 38, 2017
Aparna Pathak
Chinese Translation (Traditional)
火車之旅
我們每一個人
都是草裙舞娃娃
Chinese Translation (Simplified)
火车之旅
我们每一个人
都是草裙舞娃娃
Bio Sketch
Aparna
Pathak is a freelance writer from India. She is widely published and
some of her achievements includes: Haiku Master of the Month" (April
2016 and November 2016),NHK Haiku Masters; Commended, 2016 IAFOR Haiku
Awards; Third Place, 2016 UHIS Samurai Haibun Contest; Shortlisted, 2016
Touchstone Awards.
The opening line sets the theme while the surprising last line makes this train ride haiku visually and emotionally effective, enhancing the "hai" aspect of the haiku.
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