between time zones
waiting
for the fog to lift
Failed Haiku, 23, November 2017
Mark Gilbert
Chinese Translation (Traditional)
在時區之間
靜靜等待
霧散
Chinese Translation (Simplified)
在时区之间
静静等待
雾散
Bio Sketch
Mark Gilbert is based in the UK and has been writing haiku for over 20 years. Examples of his work may be found in the journals Heron's Nest, Sonic Boom and Under the Basho. Mark spent some of his childhood in the US and this continues to influence his writing.
L1 sets the scene (where the narrator is on a flight)while the fog in L3 works emotionally well on two levels, literal and figurative.
ReplyDeleteA fine mood haiku.