Wednesday, May 13, 2020

Butterfly Dream: Texting Haiku by Srinivasa Rao Sambangi

English Original

snail pace traffic
now and then
faster texting

Cattails, October 2017

Srinivasa Rao Sambangi 


Chinese Translation (Traditional)

蝸牛步調般的交通
不時地
更快地發短信

Chinese Translation (Simplified)


蜗牛步调般的交通
不时地
更快地发短信


Bio Sketch

Srinivasa Rao Sambangi, a Master Black Belt in Six Sigma, is currently working in a pharmaceutical company as Head of Operational Excellence. He lives in Hyderabad, India

2 comments:

  1. Empowered by the use of a pivot (L2), the contrast, visual and emotional, between L1 and L3 effectively conveys a sense of "hai."

    A highly relatable urban haiku (before the Covid19 pandemic :-))!

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  2. Thank you Chen-ou for your continued encouragement translating my haiku with wonderful commentary

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