Saturday, July 22, 2023

Butterfly Dream: Field of Reeds Haiku by Elisa Theriana

English Original

field of reeds
in the wind
in the rain

Heliosparrow, April 16th 2020

Elisa Theriana


Chinese Translation (Traditional)

一片蘆葦田
在風中
在雨中

Chinese Translation (Simplified)

一片芦苇田
在风中
在雨中


Bio Sketch

Elisa Theriana, from Bandung, Indonesia, working as a computer programmer. Haiku and tanka lover and photography  enthusiast.

1 comment:

  1. Enhanced by the use of syntactic parallelism in Ls 1&2, the scene of a field of reeds, L1, in the windy rain effectively carries symbolic significance.

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