English Original
qigong practice
in the front yard
dawn chorus
FreeXpresSion, April 2023, Volume XXX Issue 4.
Tuyet Van Do
Chinese Translation (Traditional)
在前院
操練氣功
黎明前小鳥齊鳴
Chinese Translation (Simplified)
在前院
操练气功
黎明前小鸟齐鸣
Bio Sketch
Tuyet Van Do lives in Melbourne, Australia. Her work has appeared in Pure Haiku, Time Haiku, Presence, Cattails, Under The Basho, Haiku Dialogue, haikuniverse, Poetry Pea, Take 5ive, The Bamboo Hut, Poetry Super Highway, Synchronized Chaos and others. She was nominated for the Touchstone Awards for Individual Poems 2022.
Ls 1&2 work well as the theme-setting scene while unexpected yet auditorily evocative L3 enhances the emotionally suggestive power of the haiku.
ReplyDeleteAnd it might be interesting to do a thematic comparison reading of my haiku below:
light of dawn
a tai chi master
pushes the silence
Grand Prize, First Morioka International Haiku Contest, 2019
FYI: Tai chi is a form of qigong.