English Original
snowy day
your name disappears
from the tombstone
Asahi Haikuist Network, Dec. 15, 2017
Andrzej Dembonczyk
Chinese Translation (Traditional)
下雪天
你的名字從墓碑上
消失了
Chinese Translation (Simplified)
下雪天
你的名字从墓碑上
消失了
Bio Sketch
Andrzej Dembonczyk lives in Zbroslawice, Silesia, Poland. He is a local government employee. His hobby is Aquaristics. He writes haiku, haiga, tanka and from time to time a short story or theatrical script.
L1 sets the scene and mood while visually poignant Ls 2&3 add emotional weight to the haiku
ReplyDeleteAnd my haiku below could be read as its prequel:
alone in the shadow
of Father's gravestone
early snowfall
NeverEnding Story, December 16 2024