evening stillness --
the unfinished poem
on her diary
Modern Haiku, 43:2, Summer 2012
Rita Odeh
Chinese Translation (Traditional)
傍晚的寂靜 --
她的日記中
未完成的詩
Chinese Translation (Simplified)
傍晚的寂静 --
她日记中
未完成的诗
Bio Sketch
Rita
Odeh is from Nazareth, Israel. She comes from a christian Palestinian
family. She has B.A. in English and Comparative Literature from Haifa
University. She has published 6 books of poetry,one book of short
stories, three electronic novels, one e-book of Haiku. Her poetry has
been published in several international publications. Rita is Co-Editor
of International Haiku. Her haiku and haiga artwork are featured in her "Catching The Moment" blog.
L1 establishes the context, scenic and emotive, for the poem while Ls 2&3 enhance the tone and mood.
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