a crow at dusk --
ink sinks deeper
into the page
The Heron’s Nest, 12:1, March 2010
Gregory Piko
Chinese Translation (Traditional)
昏鴉 --
墨水更深地
滲入頁面
Chinese Translation (Simplified)
昏鸦 --
墨水更深地
渗入页面
Bio Sketch
Gregory Piko's haiku have been awarded Second Prize in the 'Kusamakura' International Haiku Competition, received a Touchstone Award from The Haiku Foundation, won first prize in the New Zealand Poetry Society’s International Haiku Competition and appeared in Haiku in English: The First Hundred Years. Gregory blogs at www.gregorypiko.com.
L1, this allusive painterly scene, establishes the theme while the visually and emotionally evocative image in Ls 2&3 effectively enhances the tone and mood of the poem.
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