winter sunset ...
losing my shadow
in the shadows
jimmythepeach
Chinese Translation (Traditional)
冬日夕陽 ...
在陰影中丟失了
我的影子
Chinese Translation (Simplified)
冬日夕阳 ...
在阴影中丢失了
我的影子
Bio Sketch
jimmythepeach (Jimmy Aaron) is a musician, songwriter, producer, writer and poet who lives in Arlington, Virginia with his wife and two rescued greyhounds.
L1 sets the scene while the use of repetition in Ls 2&3 enhances the tone and mood of the haiku. And on a second reading, the word, shadow(s), effectively carries symbolic significance.
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