Thursday, February 11, 2021

Butterfly Dream: Runaway Shopping Cart Haiku by Garry Eaton

English Original

slippery slope
a runaway shopping cart
and its homeless man

World Haiku Series, 2019

Garry Eaton


Chinese Translation (Traditional)

滑坡
一輛失控的購物車
和車內無家可歸的人 

Chinese Translation (Simplified)

滑坡
一辆失控的购物车
和车内无家可归的人 


Bio Sketch

Garry Eaton was a Canadian poet from British Columbia. He started writing haiku in 2006 and was published occasionally in the major haiku magazines. He volunteered as the digital librarian for The Haiku Foundation Digital Library.

2 comments:

  1. Garry's allegorical haiku is an urban story with two levels of meaning: one is the surface story about a dangerous adrenaline-rush scene of a homeless man in a shopping cart on the slippery slope; and the other is the hidden story about some segment of a society's population going down a slippery slope of unforeseen illness, accidents, or job loss ... into homelessness.

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    1. Here are two tanka about a homeless man with a shopping cart:

      one block away
      from E-business conference
      a man
      with a shopping cart
      talking to the sky

      Honorable Mention, 2010 TSA International Tanka Contest

      Fay Aoyagi

      last glimpse
      of the winter moon ...
      an old man
      with a shopping cart
      enters my broken dream

      The Bamboo Hut, Summer 2019

      Chen-ou Liu

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