English Original
comes not in silence
comes not with noise
summer rain
Akitsu, Spring 2019
Srinivasa Rao Sambangi
comes not with noise
summer rain
Akitsu, Spring 2019
Srinivasa Rao Sambangi
Chinese Translation (Traditional)
不是沉默
沒有噪音
夏雨
Chinese Translation (Simplified)
不是沉默
没有噪音
夏雨
Bio Sketch
Srinivasa Rao Sambangi, a Master Black Belt in Six Sigma, is currently working in a Pharma Company in Hyderabad, India. His haiku are regularly published in all the leading haiku journals.
Enhanced by the effective use of syntactic parallelism, the surprise ending, "summer rain," following its preceding dialectical statements, "not in silence" and "not with noise," shows (not tells) the speaker's state of mood.
ReplyDeleteAnd it might be interesting to do a comparative reading of my haiku below:
the clattering
of mahjong tiles ...
summer rain
Runner-up, 2019 Haiku Calendar Competition
absolutely beautiful haiku
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