English Original
a lean-to
made of cardboard ...
winter rain
Ambrosia, 2, Winter 2009
Robert D. Wilson
Chinese Translation (Traditional)
紙板做成
的簡易避難所 ...
冬雨
Chinese Translation (Simplified)
纸板做成
的简易避难所 ...
冬雨
Bio Sketch
Robert D. Wilson is Co-Owner of Simply Haiku.
L2 indicates that the free-standing simple structure in L1 is a makeshift shelter most likely used by a unhoused person.
ReplyDeleteAnd L3 not only enhances the tone and mood of this homelessness haiku, but also implies its detrimental effects on the structure of Ls 1&2.
The following haiku could be read as a sequl to Robert's:
alley frost
except
where he slept
Earthshine, 2017
Chuck Brickley