dawn arrives
in paler colors ...
first snow
Elaine Andre
Chinese Translation (Traditional)
蒼白
的黎明時刻 ...
第一場雪
Chinese Translation (Simplified)
苍白
的黎明时刻 ...
第一场雪
Bio Sketch
Elaine
Andre lives in Washington State. She has designed and fabricated fine
jewelry, yachts, textiles, and paints nanga sumi-e (exhibiting
internationally). She considers haiku ideal for expressing a spiritual
journey. Recently, she co-edited the anthology, In One Breath: a Haiku moment, wrote its introduction, and contributed verses.
Ls 1 &2 set the tone for the poem while L3 effectively enhances its mood.
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