I enjoyed reading your poem in my inbox this morning Chen-ou. The snow-crystals work so well with the last line which is so 'Issa'! This to me, is an allusion to another poem that works wonderfully with your snow crystals in showing how short and fragile our lives when we think of you in your hospital room, and Issa's little daughter who died.
I enjoyed reading your poem in my inbox this morning Chen-ou. The snow-crystals work so well with the last line which is so 'Issa'! This to me, is an allusion to another poem that works wonderfully with your snow crystals in showing how short and fragile our lives when we think of you in your hospital room, and Issa's little daughter who died.
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