walking alone
even my shadow
slips away
Presence, 59, 2017
Debbi Antebi
Chinese Translation (Traditional)
獨自步行
甚至我的影子
都溜走了
Chinese Translation (Simplified)
独自步行
甚至我的影子
都溜走了
Bio Sketch
Debbi Antebi (@debbisland) lives in London, UK, with her husband and books. She exhales oxygen while reading and writing poems.
A sense of loneliness is conveyed through this visually and emotionally evocative image of the speaker who walks alone with his/her shadow slipping away. And "even" effectively adds emotional weight to the haiku.
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