Sunday, October 11, 2020

One Man's Maple Moon: Distance of Darkness Tanka by A A Marcoff

English Original

cold night:
between me & the stars
nothing
but the distance
of darkness

Blithe Spirit, 28:2, 2018

A A Marcoff


Chinese Translation (Traditional)

寒冷的夜晚:
在我和星星之間
空無一物
只剩下黑暗
的距離

Chinese Translation (Simplified)

寒冷的夜晚:
在我和星星之间
空无一物
只剩下黑暗
的距离
 
 
Bio Sketch

A A Marcoff is an Anglo-Russian poet, born in Iran, who has lived in Africa, Iran, France and Japan. He is a much-published mainstream poet as well as a writer of tanka. He lives near the beautiful River Mole in Surrey, England.

1 comment:

  1. L1 depicts a gloomy scene while the tone and mood of this minimalist tanka is effectively enhanced by the use of inversion: the weighty lines, the "distance of darkness," (now Ls 4&5) conclude the tanka.

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