winter morning
one wrinkled tangerine
on the window sill
Seasons of Haiku
Pat Tompkins
Chinese Translation (Traditional)
冬天早晨
一個皺巴巴的橘子
在窗台上
Chinese Translation (Simplified)
冬天早晨
一个皱巴巴的橘子
在窗台上
Bio Sketch
Pat Tompkins is an editor in the San Francisco Bay Area. Her haiku have appeared in various publications, including The Heron's Nest, A Hundred Gourds, and Mayfly.
L1 successfully sets an emotive context while Ls 2&3 enhances the tone and mode.
ReplyDeleteThe closing image works emotionally effectively on two levels, literal and metaphoric.