canadageese
swimming
V form
atio
n
Haiku Canada Review, 8:2, October 2014
kjmunro
Chinese Translation (Traditional)
戲水的加拿大
鵝形成
V 字
形
Chinese Translation (Simplified)
戏水的加拿大
鹅形成
V 字
形
Bio Sketch
Originally from Vancouver, British Columbia, Canada, kjmunro moved to the Yukon Territory in 1991. She is Membership Secretary for Haiku Canada, and is an Associate Member of the League of Canadian Poets. Her chapbook, summer evening, is available through Leaf Press as number ten in their oak leaflet series.
kjmunro's effective verb choice (swimming not flying) and her placement of lines/arrangement of linguistic elements (such as "canadageese," "swimming," and "V form") lift the poem out of the ordinary.
ReplyDeleteA well-crafted concrete haiku.