this grey day
I drift from one thought
to the next …
a spider in the breeze
on a disconnected thread
A Hundred Gourds, 4:3, June 2015
Marilyn Humbert
Chinese Translation (Traditional)
在這個灰暗的日子
我的思緒
不斷地飄蕩 ...
微風中一隻蜘蛛
在斷開的絲線上
Chinese Translation (Simplified)
在这个灰暗的日子
我的思绪
不断地飘荡...
微风中一只蜘蛛
在断开的丝线上
Bio Sketch
Marilyn
 Humbert lives in the Northern Suburbs of Sydney NSW surrounded by bush.
 Her pastimes include writing free verse poetry, tanka, tanka prose and 
related genre. She is the leader of Bottlebrush Tanka Group and member 
of the Huddle and Bowerbird Tanka Groups. Her tanka appears in 
Australian and international journals.
Thematically and emotionally speaking, the closing image resonates closely with the opening statement. The implied simile is successfully established between the two parts of the poem.
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