Monday, July 1, 2013

To the Lighthouse: Tentori (Point-Scoring) Haikai and Haikai Twist

In the narrow sense of the word, haikai, which gave birth to haiku, originally referred to the humorous poems found in the first imperially commissioned anthology of poetry. It was later used to describe popular comic linked verse (haikai no renga), distinguishing itself from the more refined, classical linked verse (renga). Broadly speaking, it is used to "describe genres deriving from haikai or reflecting haikai spirit, such as haiku, haibun, renku, and haikai kikobun, literary travel account."1 During the second half of the 17th century, there were innovative movements within Japanese haikai circles, and they had transformed haikai from an entertaining pastime to a respected poetic form.2 … Matsuo Basho made an enormous contribution to the refinement, success, and popularization of Japanese haiku and its related genres.3 (excerpted from my essay, "Make Haibun New through the Chinese Poetic Past: Basho's Transformation of Haikai Prose," which was first published in Simply Haiku, 8:1, Summer 2010 and then reprinted in Haibun Today, 6:1, March 2012)

Although literary historians have often talked about three successive major schools of haikai -- the Teimon, Danrin, and Shomon (the Basho school) – in the later half of the seventeenth century and “have identified the Genroku period (1688--1704) with the ‘Basho style’.” 12 However, recent studies have showed that even at the summit of his career, Basho was just one of several prominent haikai masters, and was far from having the largest number of followers or having formed the most influential school. 13 After his death in 1694, his disciples had varied views on writing haikai, emphasizing different aspects of the “Basho style,” and eventually formed their own followings. Within years, Basho’s school faded quickly, and his disciples and their followers used his name and legacy to form individual factions, fighting fiercely with each other to expand their local base of poetic influence…

During the first four decades of the eighteenth century, most of Basho’s first generation disciples passed away. The internal fighting became worse, and haikai lost the elegance and beauty that Basho had imparted to the form. “The ‘grandchildren disciples’ of Basho either reverted to the superficial humor of the Teitoku and Danrin schools, or else wrote verses of such utter simplicity and insignificance that they hardly merit the name of poetry.” 19

Even worse was the rise and great influence of a highly commercialized form of haikai -- tentori (point-scoring) haikai. During Buson’s day, there was a group of professional verse-markers (tenja) who mainly relied on their literary talents to make a living. Through the aid of a go-between, the verse-marker set the verse, the haikai practitioners responded to it with their verses, and then the verse-marker graded them with points (ten). The verse-marker and the go-between were paid for their service, and the practitioners got their points and competed with each other to see who earned the most points. This type of haikai has helped popularize the genre and also been highly successful in the early eighteenth century. 20

However, there were a lot of downsides to this popular trend. The verse-markers were mainly driven by commercial rather than educational goals: the more the practitioners, the greater their income. As for the practitioners who indulged themselves in this type of  haikai, “it no longer was necessary to display depth of feeling or even a knowledge of tradition provided one was clever enough to twist the seventeen syllables into an amusing comment.”  21 One of the poetic characteristics the haikai masters had advocated was to create a haikai twist, and its creation was dependent on the poet’s “skillful balancing of  the conventional meaning, i.e., the honi, of a topic with whatever new and startling insight [he/she was] able to add to it, typically creating a clash between the worlds of ga [the elegant and refined] and zoku [the mundane or commonplace].” 22 (excerpted from my essay, "Reviving Japanese Haikai through Chinese Classics: Yosa Buson and the Basho Revival," which was first published in Haijinx, 4:1, March 2011 and then reprinted in Simply Haiku, 9:1, Spring 2011)

Take Basho’s famous frog haiku below as an example:

The old pond;                               Furu ike ya
A frog jumps in --                         kawazu tobikomu
The sound of the water.                 mizu no oto

Basho added an extra layer of meaning or surprise by using a kigo, kawazu (frog), in an unusual way. With its circle of associations, kawazu provided a special pipeline to the reader, increasing the complexity and capacity of the poem. 9 For example, there are some 140 poems classified under the section titled “ponds” in Fubokusho (Selected Poems from the Land of the Rising Sun), a standard waka anthology, none of them depicts a frog. 10 More importantly, read in the context of classical Japanese poetry and the haiku poetics, kawazu is a seasonal word for spring used in poems since ancient times, and had always referred to its singing and calling out to a lover. The preface to the first imperial anthology titled Kokinshu describes “listening to the warbler singing among the blossoms and the song of the frog dwelling in the water” 11 as in the following poem:

On the upper rapids
a frog calls for his love.
Is it because,
his sleeves chilled by the evening,
he wants to share his pillow? 12

Instead of giving “the song of the frog,” Basho focused on the water sound of a diving frog. He was the first poet ever to defy the poetic essence (honi) of the frog by emphasizing the “splash” that it makes, working against what one would expect from reading classical waka or renga. 13 In juxtaposing these two seemingly incongruous worlds and languages of ga (elegance) and zoku (vulgarity), Basho humorously inverted and recast established cultural associations and conventions of the frog. In doing so, he created a comical effect: a “parody of classical poetry that refers to the frog as expressive of romantic longing.” 14 (excerpted from my essay, "The Ripples from a Splash: A Generic Analysis of Basho’s Frog Haiku," which was first published in Magnapoets, 7,January 2011 )

The tentori practitioners were less versed in waka and renga, learned little from their commercially-minded verse-markers, and thus concerned themselves with the craft of haiaki less than with writing some seemingly dazzling poems to score high points and to impress their fellow practitioners. When writing haikai, they favored the zoku over the ga to score points, failing to create a haikai twist on the honi of a topic. 23

The most obvious and harmful result of this trend was that haikai became a commodity. The verse-markers didn’t help cultivate literary taste and knowledge of haikai, but rather they focused on producing points for the haikai practitioners who showed little interest in the craft of haikai, only in accumulating the points needed to impress each other. This pitiful situation did not improve until a group of Edo poets published the anthology, Ink of Five Colors, in 1731, emphasizing the skillful use of literary devices, such as word plays and similes. 24  This publication stimulated some aspiring poets to advocate the “Back to Basho” movement that openly expressed its opposition to the prevailing tentori haikai. It took almost a decade to let the haikai revival proper begin. In 1743, the fiftieth anniversary of Basho’s death, a memorial anthology was published by his followers, firmly indicating their intention to spread his poetic ideals. Furthermore, some dedicated poets followed Basho’s journey to the north of Japan, building memorial sites along the way. 25 …Finally, the Basho Revival movement “came to the fore in the 1760s and climaxed during 1770s – 1780s… [and was] led first by Taigi (1709 – 71) and then by Buson (1716 – 83).” (excerpted from my essay, "Reviving Japanese Haikai through Chinese Classics: Yosa Buson and the Basho Revival," which was first published in Haijinx, 4:1, March 2011 and then reprinted in Simply Haiku, 9:1, Spring 2011) For more information about the movement, see Haruo Shirane, Traces of Dreams: Landscape, Cultural Memory, and the Poetry of Basho, pp. 33-7.

Sunday, June 30, 2013

One Man's Maple Moon: Fog Tanka by Aya Yuhki

English Original

the realm
of words should be
flexible
like fog ascending
between mountains

Gusts, 16, Fall/Winter 2012

Aya Yuhki


Chinese Translation (Traditional)
   
文字的境界
應該
靈活一些
就像霧
在群山之間升起

Chinese Translation (Simplified)

文字的境界
应该
灵活一些
就像雾
在群山之间升起


Bio Sketch

Aya Yuhki was born and now lives in Tokyo. She started writing tanka more than thirty years ago and has expanded her interests to include free verse poetry, essay writing, and literary criticism. Aya Yuhki is Editor-in-Chief of The Tanka Journal published by the Japan Poets’ Society. Her works are featured on the homepage of the Japan Pen Club’s Electronic Library.

Saturday, June 29, 2013

Butterfly Dream: Ants Haiku by Fay Aoyagi

English Original

ants out of a hole --
when did I stop playing
the red toy piano?

Beyond the Reach of My Chopsticks

Fay Aoyagi


Chinese Translation (Traditional)

螞蟻出洞 --
我什麼時候停止彈奏
紅色玩具鋼琴?

Chinese Translation (Simplified)

蚂蚁出洞 --
我什麽时候停止弹奏
红色玩具钢琴?


Bio Sketch

Fay Aoyagi (青柳飛)was born in Tokyo and immigrated to the U.S. in 1982. She is currently a member of Haiku Society of America and Haiku Poets of Northern California. She serves as an associate editor of The Heron's Nest.  She also writes in Japanese and belongs to two Japanese haiku groups; Ten'I (天為) and "Aki"(秋), and she is a member of Haijin Kyokai (俳人協会).

Friday, June 28, 2013

A Room of My Own: Borderland Tanka Set

Changing the World One tanka at a Time series


raining nights
in bloody 1846...
a Mexican yells out
We didn’t cross the border
The border crossed us

a mother's hands
reach out to her children
through the bars
of a fence that divides
Mexico from Arizona


Note: The first tanka was published in Ribbons, 8:3, Winter 2013

Thursday, June 27, 2013

Butterfly Dream: Leaves Haiku by Michael Dylan Welch

English Original

a table for one --
leaves rustle
in the inner courtyard

Into the Open: Poems from Poets of the Sixth Skagit River Poetry Festival

Michael Dylan Welch


Chinese Translation (Traditional)

 一人用餐 --
在庭院內
樹葉的沙沙聲

Chinese Translation (Simplified)

一人用餐 --
在庭院内
树叶的沙沙声


Bio Sketch

Michael Dylan Welch is vice president of the Haiku Society of America, founder of the Tanka Society of America (2000), and cofounder of Haiku North America conference (1991) and the American Haiku Archives (1996). In 2010 he also started National Haiku Writing Month (NaHaiWriMo), which takes place every February, with an active Facebook page. His personal website is www.graceguts.com, which features hundreds of essays, reviews, reports, and other content, including examples of his published poetry.

Wednesday, June 26, 2013

One Man's Maple Moon: Relationship Tanka by Sergio Ortiz

English Original

learning
to say goodbye…
a fraction
of me touching you
in secret places

Breath and Shadows

Sergio Ortiz


Chinese Translation (Traditional)

學習
說再見...
在秘密的地方
一小部分的
我撫摸你

Chinese Translation (Simplified)

学习
说再见...
在秘密的地方
一小部分的
我抚摸你


Bio Sketch

Sergio Ortiz is an educator.  Flutter Press released his debut chapbook, At the Tail End of Dusk (2009), and his second chapbook, Bedbugs in My Mattress (2010).  He is a three-time nominee for the 2010, 2011 Sundress Best of the Web Anthology, and a 2010 Pushcart nominee.  He received a Commendation in the 2012 International Polish Haiku Competition.  His poems appear in, Shot Glass, Notes from the Gean, Atlas Poetica, Skylark, A Hundred Gourds, Poetry Pacific Lynx, and Kernels Online; are forthcoming in Ribbons.

Tuesday, June 25, 2013

Butterfly Dream: Death Haiku by LeRoy Gorman

English Original

no way out
Death’s at the door
demanding candy

The Heron's Nest, 12:1, March 2010

LeRoy Gorman


Chinese Translation (Traditional)

沒有出路
死亡在門口
索取糖果

Chinese Translation (Simplified)

没有出路
死亡在门口
索取糖果


Bio Sketch

LeRoy Gorman writes mostly minimalist and visual poetry.  His most recent book, fast enough to leave this world, is one of tanka published by Inkling Press, Edmonton.  More information on his writing can be found at the American Haiku Archives where he is the Honorary Curator for 2012-2013.

Monday, June 24, 2013

Poetic Musings: Plum Blossoms Haiku by Chen-ou Liu

In Memory of My Teacher and Friend, Paul Crudden


a deceased friend
taps me on the shoulder --
plum blossoms falling

Heron’s Nest Award, The Heron’s Nest, 13:2, June 2011
Grand Prize: Poem of the Year, The Heron’s Nest, Vol. 13, 2011



Some haiku please us from the first reading. Some beckon us to move beyond limits we’ve assigned to what constitutes “proper” English-language haiku. Some explode into our consciousness with all the stunning beauty of the first blooms of spring. And some do all these things and more. Chen-ou Liu’s is one of those. At first reading, I loved it. Then I questioned my response, asking, “Doesn’t this break a whole bunch of Haiku Rules? Isn’t this metaphor? Is it gendai? Am I supposed to like this as much as I do?” It seemed daringly outside my comfort zone. Then I simply let it take me into a world that was at once surreal — and so real. Whether a moment such as this triggers the memory of a loved one (a metaphorical tap) — or, for just a split second, we forget and turn, expecting to see them there — I trust many of us have experienced this. It is a moment as filled with poignancy as this poem. We are literally touched at the deepest level — with inexpressible longing — and with a jolt of such joy mixed into our sorrow we can only feel blessed.


Jane Reichhold's Comment:

In Chinese and Japanese literature, the butterfly was long used as a symbol of a departed soul. Chen-ou has taken the idea that the departed are still among us and found a very new and touching way of expressing this idea that we can only manifest by feeling. If you have ever stood under a tree as the petals drift down you will know how very light this touch is. And yet you can feel it and it seems a blessing.

To make the leap to thinking it is the touch of a departed friend is genius. This is why we need poets - to discover such truths, ideas, concepts. If we could remember that the touch of every blossom, the wetness of a raindrop, every glint of light was a reminder of the departed who surround us, how much more meaningful our lives would be. How much more reverence we would have for the simplest thing. This is why we have haiku - to remind us of profound ideas in simple things.

The association between the sadness of a friend who passed away, and the blossoms which are also passing is clear. Yet out of this sadness Chen-ou has found a ray of pleasure. He is not alone. His friend is close enough to touch him as are all our beloved departed. This is a very beautiful haiku and well-deserving of all of its honours.-- excerpted from FAVOURITE HAIKU chosen by Jane Reichhold

Sunday, June 23, 2013

Butterfly Dream: Day of the Dead Haiku by Jack Galmitz

English Original

the Day of the Dead
is celebrated everyday –
Ciudad Juarez

yards & lots

Jack Galmitz


Chinese Translation (Traditional)

亡靈節
是每天都在慶祝 --
華雷斯城

Chinese Translation (Simplified)

亡灵节
是每天都在庆祝 --
华雷斯城


Bio Sketch

Jack Galmitz was born in NYC in 1951. He received a Ph.D in English from the University of Buffalo.  He is an Associate of the Haiku Foundation and Contributing Editor at Roadrunner Journal.  His most recent books are Views (Cyberwit.net,2012), a genre study of minimalist poetry, and Letters (Lulu Press, 2012), a book of poetry.  He lives in New York with his wife and stepson.

Saturday, June 22, 2013

One Man’s Maple Moon: Beach Fire Tanka by Susan Constable

English Original

in twilight
by the beach fire
I shiver
thinking of the last time
you turned to wave goodbye

3rd place, 2010 Tanka Society of America Contest

Susan Constable


Chinese Translation (Traditional)

黃昏
在海灘營火旁
想到最後一次
你轉身揮手告別
我就顫抖不止

Chinese Translation (Simplified)

黄昏
在海滩营火旁
想到最後一次
你转身挥手告别
我就颤抖不止


Bio Sketch

Susan Constable’s tanka appear in numerous journals and anthologies, including Take Five. She placed third in the 2010 Tanka Society of America Contest and her tanka collection, The Eternity of Waves, is one of the winning entries in the eChapbook Awards for 2012. She is currently the tanka editor for the international on-line journal, A Hundred Gourds. Susan lives with her husband on Canada’s beautiful west coast.

Friday, June 21, 2013

Butterfly Dream: Fruits Haiku by Beverly Acuff Momoi

English Original

slicing green tomatoes
and baby watermelon
the sun in my hands
                 
Modern Haiku, 42:3, Autumn 2011

Beverly Acuff Momoi


Chinese Translation (Traditional)
   
將綠蕃茄
和小西瓜切片
太陽在我手中

Chinese Translation (Simplified)

将绿蕃茄
和小西瓜切片
太阳在我手中


Bio Sketch

Beverly Acuff Momoi’s poems have been published widely, appearing in such journals as Acorn, A Hundred Gourds, American Tanka, Eucalypt, Frogpond, Modern Haiku, Ribbons, and Simply Haiku. Her haibun collection, Lifting the Towhee's Song, is a 2011 Snapshot Press eChapbook Award winner and is freely available online at: http://www.snapshotpress.co.uk/ebooks.htm

One Man's Maple Moon: Young Man and Old Hand Tanka by Neal Whitman

English Original

a young man and his dog
both sleeping on a park bench
with one buck in his hat --
an old hand saunters past
and lifts … hat and bill

Atlas Poetica, 12, Winter 2011

Neal Whitman


Chinese Translation (Traditional)

一個年輕人和他的狗
在公園的長椅上睡覺
一塊錢在他的帽子裡 --
一個老手溜達過去
拿走 ...帽子和一元鈔票

Chinese Translation (Simplified)

一个年轻人和他的狗
在公园的长椅上睡觉
一块钱在他的帽子里 --
一个老手溜达过去
拿走 ...帽子和一元钞票


Bio Sketch

Neal Whitman of Pacific Grove, California, is a member of the Yuki Teikei Haiku Society, Haiku Poets of Northern California, Haiku Society of America, and Tanka Society of America. Over the past five years he has published over 400 haiku, haibun, and tanka and haiga with his wife, Elaine, who is a photographer.

Thursday, June 20, 2013

A Room of My Own: A Midsummer Day's Museum Tour

Van Gogh at Work...
I feel like wearing the face
of a sunflower

Rembrandt's Night Watch
a line of Japanese tourists
clicks and turns

Rodin's Le Baiser
this urge to hold
a stranger's hand

the Jesuits
hacked off his penis
Semini Statue

Woestyne's  Last Supper
the security guard eats
three chocolates

homecoming dream:
a white dove flies out of
Wheat Field with Crows


Notes:

1 Semini  is viewed as an ancient fertility symbol.
2 It is commonly stated that Wheat Field with Crows was van Gogh's last painting.

Wednesday, June 19, 2013

Butterfly Dream: Heat Wave Haiku by Bob Lucky

English Original

heat wave
the mailman fans himself
with my bills                                               

The Heron’s Nest, 9:3, September 2007

Bob Lucky


Chinese Translation (Traditional)

熱浪
郵差用我的賬單
扇涼

Chinese Translation (Simplified)

热浪
邮差用我的账单
扇凉


Bio Sketch

Bob Lucky teaches at the International Community School of Addis Ababa, Ethiopia. His work has appeared in numerous journals, including Rattle, The Prose-Poem Project, Emerald Bolts, Modern Haiku, Presence, Ribbons, Eucalypt, and Atlas Poetica. He is co-author of the chapbook my favorite thing. 

Tuesday, June 18, 2013

One Man's Maple Moon: Hospital Chapel Tanka by Kirsten Cliff

English Original

planning our wedding
in the hospital chapel
while I have chemo
I am not dying
but a part of me is

Take Five: Best Contemporary Tanka, Volume 4, 2012

Kirsten Cliff


Chinese Translation (Traditional)

在醫院教堂
策劃我們的婚禮
當時我在接受化療
我不會隨即就死
但部分的我已死
   
Chinese Translation (Simplified)

在医院教堂
策划我们的婚礼
当时我在接受化疗
我不会随即就死
但部分的我已死


Bio Sketch

Kirsten Cliff is a New Zealand writer and poet whose work has been published in journals worldwide, and will soon appear in A New Resonance 8. She is currently working on her first collection, Patient Property, which explores her recent journey through leukaemia. Kirsten is editor of the haikai section of the New Zealand Poetry Society magazine, a fine line, and she blogs at Swimming in Lines of Haiku.