English Original
hospital parking
the level closest to heaven
fills last
connected to peace, 2023
LeRoy Gorman
Chinese Translation (Traditional)
醫院停車場
最接近天堂的樓層
最後停滿
医院停车场
Bio Sketch
最接近天堂的楼层
最后停满
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Bio Sketch
LeRoy Gorman lives in Napanee, Ontario. His poetry, much of it minimalist and visual, has appeared in publications and exhibitions worldwide. He is the author of two dozen poetry books and chapbooks. He is also the winner of the 2017 Dwarf Stars Award
L1 sets the scene while the tone and idiomatic expression, "closest" to "heaven"/not the sky fill[ing] "last," of Ls 2&3, might indicate the N's state of mood/mind, making this haiku fresh and effective.
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