Showing posts with label deaths. Show all posts
Showing posts with label deaths. Show all posts

Thursday, May 7, 2026

Poetic Musings: Boulders and Headstones Tanka by Paul Williamson

in pale sunshine
granite boulders dot the paddocks ... 
I remember
the headstones for miners
who once rushed here for gold

NeverEnding Story, July 23, 2023

Paul Williamson


Commentary: Ls 1&2 establish a muted, elegiac tone. The “pale sunshine” suggests diminished warmth and vitality, while the granite boulders “dot[ting] the paddocks” evoke a quiet, almost incidental permanence. These natural forms function as a kind of unconscious memorial, subtly anticipating the explicitly human markers of loss introduced in Ls 4&5.

A shift unfolds between past and present land use. The once-chaotic energy of the gold rush—captured in the single, kinetic verb “rushed” in L5 —gives way to the stillness of an agricultural landscape. This contrast heightens the sense of transience: human urgency and desire flare briefly, then recede, leaving behind a subdued and enduring terrain.

The tanka’s emotional force lies in the visual and conceptual parallel between the granite boulders and the miners’ headstones. The rocks scattered across the paddocks mirror the graves, suggesting that the miners have, in a sense, merged with the land they sought to exploit. What remains is not the gold they pursued, but the granite itself—solid, unyielding, and indifferent.

In this way, the tanka becomes a socio-historical meditation on impermanence. Human ambition, however intense, is fleeting; the landscape absorbs its traces and returns to stillness, bearing only quiet witness to what has passed.

Monday, February 9, 2026

Biting NOT Barking: War Crime Haiku by Garry Eaton

English Original

war crime
he puts a gun to his head
and kills them all

Kamesan's World Haiku Anthology on War, Violence and Human Rights Violation, 2017

Garry Eaton


Chinese Translation (Traditional) 

戰爭罪行
他用槍指著自己的頭
然後殺死他們所有的人

Chinese Translation (Simplified)

战争罪行
他用枪指着自己的头
然后杀死他们所有的人


Bio Sketch

Garry Eaton was a Canadian poet from British Columbia. He started writing haiku in 2006 and was published occasionally in the major haiku magazines. He volunteered as the digital librarian for The Haiku Foundation Digital Library.

Thursday, November 6, 2025

Poetic Musings: Collapsed School Wall Haiku by Chen-ou Liu

collapsed school wall
a butterfly
in shades of charcoal

First Place, 2025 Porad Haiku Award

Chen-ou Liu

Commentary by the judge, Jacquie Pearce: The poet approaches this heavy topic carefully, with concrete details and restraint. The “collapsed school wall” could be a bombed school in Gaza or Ukraine, and it could also represent other types of attacks on schools, learning, and children’s feelings of safety, even in North America. For me, the image of the butterfly also alludes to nature overlooked as human acts of destruction are carried out (the poem also takes on the visual shape of a butterfly when it’s centered). The butterfly, presumably drawn by a child, contrasts poignantly with the medium of charcoal scavenged from ashes and applied to a collapsed wall, as does the adult world of war/politics/destruction and the child’s natural inclination to play and create. We feel a vulnerability and fragility in the image of the butterfly and the alluded-to child. Yet we also sense resilience, bravery, and hope.


Author's Note: The bombed school is located in Gaza. This haiku could be read as a sequel to my haiku below:

Against the Drowning Noise of Other Words, LXXXIV: "Palestinian poppies"

slanted moonlight
on a half-collapsed school wall
chalk poppies bloom

reprinted in 2025 HSA Membership Anthology


FYI: "The Palestinian poppy (Anemone coronaria) is a non-official but more recognizable national symbol of Palestine. It's red, with black center and green leaves, evoking the primary colors of the Palestinian flag. And it symbolizes the relationship between Palestinians and their land, the bloodshed they have endured, as well as their resistance against Israeli occupation."

United Nations Press Release, April 18, 2024: UN experts deeply concerned over ‘scholasticide’ in Gaza

And Democracy Now, Jan.6, 2025: American Historical Association Votes Overwhelmingly for Resolution to Oppose Scholasticide in Gaza

The American Historical Association, the oldest learned society in the United States, has adopted the “Resolution to Oppose Scholasticide in Gaza,” condemning Israel’s “intentional effort to comprehensively destroy the Palestinian education system.” 


Added:

War Is Peace 

pyramid
after pyramid of rubble ...
again "ceasefire" strikes

fireball by fireball ...
the length
of a Gazan night

smoky twilight
a cry sinks into the sound
of a gunshot

skeletal houses
these layers of silence
upon silence



Added: Against the Drowning Noise of Other Words, CCXLVII: "blood-stained Christ's thorns"

a skeletal house
amidst debris and shards of pots
blood-stained Christ's thorns


FYI: "Euphorbia milii, the Christ's thorn , also known as the crown of thorns, is a pretty succulent plant that can bloom almost year-round, even indoors. According to a religious legend, the crown of thorns worn by Jesus Christ at the crucifixion was made from the stems of this plant, therefore its common name...It thrives in bright light, requires minimal watering, and is highly drought-tolerant, making it easy to care for."

Friday, August 8, 2025

Reading More and Writing Better: Daily Banality Tanka by Chen-ou Liu

written in response to  Haaretz, Aug 5, 2025: Large Majority of Israeli Jews Untroubled by Reports of Famine in Gaza, Poll Finds

A vast majority of Israeli Jews – 79 percent – say they are "not so troubled" or "not troubled at all" by the reports of famine and suffering among the Palestinian population in Gaza, according to a poll released Tuesday

And in memory of the philosopher and political thinker Hannah Arendt, author of Eichmann in Jerusalem: A Report on the Banality of Evil 

word after word
squeezed out of the PM's mouth
in broad daylight
this daily "banality"
of dying, of death in Gaza


Note: Eichmann in Jerusalem: A Report on the Banality of Evil is a 1963 book by the philosopher and political thinker Hannah Arendt. Arendt, a Jew who fled Germany during Adolf Hitler's rise to power, reported on the trial of Adolf Eichmann, one of the major organizers of the Holocaust, for The New Yorker. A revised and enlarged edition was published in 1964.

Arendt's subtitle famously introduced the phrase "the banality of evil." In part the phrase refers to Eichmann's deportment at the trial as the man displayed neither guilt for his actions nor hatred for those trying him, claiming he bore no responsibility because he was simply "doing his job." ("He did his 'duty'...; he not only obeyed 'orders,' he also obeyed the 'law.'")... 


For more about this then controversial, now classic book, see this fine essay, "Reflecting on Hannah Arendt and Eichmann in Jerusalem: A Report on the Banality of Evil" 

Abstract:

In this essay, we offer a modern legal reading of Hannah Arendt’s classic book, Eichmann in Jerusalem. First we provide a brief account of how Arendt came to write Eichmann in Jerusalem and explain her central arguments and observations. We then consider the contemporary relevance of Arendt’s work to us as legal academics engaged with a variety of problems arising from our times. We consider Arendt’s writing of Eichmann in Jerusalem as a study in intellectual courage and academic integrity, as an important example of accessible political theory, as challenging the academic to engage in participatory action, and as informing our thinking about judgement when we engage in criminal law reform. Finally, we consider the role of Arendt’s moral judgement for those within government today and how it defends and informs judgement of the modern bureaucrat at a time of heightened government secrecy.


And when evaluated in the context of Israel's genocidal war  in Gaza, the first daily televised genocide, my Ls 3-5 intend to transform the Arendtian concept of the "banality of evil as just doing one's job and obeying the law "behind the barbed wire/inside the camp into "the one, not a serious injustice but a normalized, everyday banality in broad daylight that loses its power to shock and inspire action or thought."


The intolerable is no longer a serious injustice, but the permanent state of a daily banality. Man is not himself a world other than the one in which he experiences the intolerable andvfeels himself trapped.  

Gilles Deleuze, Cinema 2: The Time-Image, pp. 169-70

"Gilles Deleuze's statement suggests that, in modern life, extreme "intolerable" events no longer stand out as exceptional injustices, but rather have become a normalized, everyday banality, losing their power to shock and inspire action or thought. This normalization implies a kind of societal exhaustion or desensitization, where suffering becomes so pervasive that it is accepted as a constant state, making even serious injustices seem mundane. "


FYI: "Israel's oldest dailyHaaretz," which was was sanctioned by the Israeli government on Nov. 24, 2024

August 7:Israeli Security Cabinet Approves Netanyahu's Gaza Takeover Plan, Ignoring IDF Warnings

The security cabinet also approved Netanyahu's plan for the IDF to take full control of Gaza City. Sources say that the evacuation of Gaza City residents to alternative areas is expected to be completed by October 7, and only afterward is the military takeover expected to begin.

And August, 7, Opinion: Israeli Leftists Say They Lost Compassion for Palestinians. But Did It Ever Exist?

The refusal to see Palestinians as human beings isn't a side effect of October 7. This phenomenon predates the latest war, the operations in Gaza, the terror attacks and the rockets. It's a fundamental element of Israel's national consciousness.


Added: Against the Drowning Noise of Other Words, CCXIV: "starvation death"

another day
another refugee tent
another baby
skin loose on her bones
starving to death with open eyes