Wednesday, April 2, 2025

One Man's Maple Moon: Beast and Cherry Blossoms Tanka by Fumi Saito

English Original

long dead
the bones of a beast
decaying tonight
I am nearly choked
as cherry blossoms are falling


Fumi Saito


Chinese Translation (Traditional)

早已死去
一頭野獸的骨頭
今晚腐爛
當櫻花飄落之時
我差點窒息

Chinese Translation (Simplified)

早已死去
一头野兽的骨头
今晚腐烂
当樱花飘落之时
我差点窒息
 
 
Bio Sketch

Daughter of a military officer who was noted for his verse-writing talent, Fumi Saito began writing poetry in the traditional 31-syllable tanka form in her early teens. Her first book of tanka, Fish Songs, published in 1940, immediately established her as a brilliant young poet. She was inducted into the Japan Art Academy in 1993 and invited to serve as meshiudo (a position similar to the Poet Laureate's) at the Imperial Palace in 1997.

Tuesday, April 1, 2025

Butterfly Dream: Dollhouse Haiku by vincent tripi

English Original

white lilac scent --
the dollhouse at the window
with its window open

Haiku Anthology, 1999

vincent tripi 


Chinese Translation (Traditional)

白丁香花香味 --
窗邊一個娃娃屋
的窗戶敞開

Chinese Translation (Simplified)

白丁香花香味 --
窗边一个娃娃屋
的窗户敞开


Bio Sketch

Founder of The Haiku Circle, vincent tripi was closely associated with the spiritual movement in American Haiku. He wrote haiku for over 35 years, and published 14 books of haiku. Most of his haiku reflect a Buddhist foundation.

Monday, March 31, 2025

Butterfly Dream: Midnight Silence Haiku by David He

English Original

midnight silence ...
my wife opens the curtains
to let in moonlight

David He


Chinese Translation (Traditional)

午夜的寂靜…
我妻子打開窗簾
讓月光照進來

Chinese Translation (Simplified)

午夜的寂静…
我妻子打开窗帘
让月光照进来


Bio Sketch

David He has been working as an Advanced English teacher for 35 years in a high school in China. So far he has published  twenty short stories in English. In recent years he has published haiku and tanka in print journals and e-zines, including Acorn, The Heron’s Nest, Frogpond, Ribbons and Cattails.

Sunday, March 30, 2025

Poetic Musings: Dawn Moon Haiku by Marian Olson

dawn moon
quiet mind, quiet
embers in the ash

Mann Library’s Daily Haiku, May 9, 2014

Marian Olson

Commentary: Enhanced by the midline break, the use of repetition of "quite," when juxtaposed with visually evocative and symbolically rich images of "dawn moon" and "embers in the ash," is fresh and psychologically effective, successfully conveying a sense of "contemplative calmness."

And it might be interesting to do a thematic comparison reading of my haiku below:

hazy day moon
alone, awake with the weight
of memory

PoemHunter, Feb. 17, 2013

The past is never dead. It's not even past.

― William Faulkner, "Requiem for a Nun"

Saturday, March 29, 2025

A Room of My Own: A Season of Regret

snowed in
for three straight days
again, I check
the machine for the sound
of your voice

I dream 
that winter dream again ...
sadder than then
as I look out the window
at the sky, endless gray


FYI: This set could be read as a prequel to my tanka below:

It's me
I just wanted to hear
from you ...
fifteen seconds of soft voice
after ten years of silence

Gusts, 35, Spring/Summer 2022


Added: Trump Empire, Inc., XV

Day and Night, Forever?
for Mark Twain who claimed, "Politicians and diapers must be changed often, and for the same reason."

step after step
one by one to the exit
DOGE cuts

red district town hall 
a crowd-fest 
of boos and jeers 

distant sirens
free-ranging dogs pee
on the Trump Mural

Liberation Day!
the news on mute, I change
my baby's diaper


FYI: DOGE stands for the Department of Government Efficiency. And the Convicted Felon Donald Trump is set to roll out his massive tariff plan on April 2, which he has touted as "Liberation Day in America."


Added:

a dollhouse
in the rain-streaked window
of a thrift store
a girl holds her mother's hand
tight ... and tighter 


Added:

frost flowers
on my son's study room window
paper planes gather dust

Friday, March 28, 2025

Butterfly Dream: Father's Ring Haiku by H. Gene Murtha

English Original

shooting star -- 
father’s ring
slips off my finger

 The Heron’s Nest, 5:11, November, 2003

H. Gene Murtha


Chinese Translation (Traditional)

一顆流星 --
父親的戒指
從我的手指上滑落

Chinese Translation (Simplified)

一颗流星 --
父亲的戒指
从我的手指上滑落


Bio Sketch

H. Gene Murtha, a naturalist and poet, sponsored and judged the first haiku contest for the inner city children of Camden, NJ., for the Virgilio Group, of which he was a lifetime member. He was widely published for his work in haikai literature from the USA to Japan. 

Thursday, March 27, 2025

One Man's Maple Moon: Caregiver Tanka by Lorraine Pester

English Original

after five years
no longer your caregiver,
nothing matters now ...
unable to live
you sleep forever

Lorraine Pester


Chinese Translation (Traditional)

五年後
不再是你的照顧者,
現在什麼都不重要了 ...
無法活下去
你永遠沉睡

Chinese Translation (Simplified)

五年后
不再是你的照顾者,
现在什么都不重要了 ...
无法活下去
你永远沉睡


Bio Sketch

Being curious and staying open to possibility is Lorraine Pester’s way of keeping her haikai fresh. She shies from no topic that presents itself. Her deliberate interactions with birds while dog walking is a frequent theme. She lives with her husband and  Abbey schnauzer in south Texas. 

Wednesday, March 26, 2025

Biting NOT Barking: Early Freeze Haiku by LeRoy Gorman

English Original

early freeze
some give in the sign
GOD SAVES

Modern Haiku, 55:3, Autumn 2024

Leroy Gorman


Chinese Translation (Traditional)

早來的結冰
有些人提交了
上帝拯救的標誌
    
Chinese Translation (Simplified)

早来的结冰
有些人提交了
上帝拯救的标志


Bio Sketch

LeRoy Gorman lives in Napanee, Ontario. His poetry, much of it minimalist and visual, has appeared in publications and exhibitions worldwide. He is the author of two dozen poetry books and chapbooks. He is also the winner of the 2017 Dwarf Stars Award

Tuesday, March 25, 2025

Butterfly Dream: Turn Sign and Wild Lilies Haiku by Ellen Compton

English Original

missing the turn sign
                                    missing the turn
                                                                wild lilies

Woodnote, 30, 1996

Ellen Compton


Chinese Translation (Traditional)

錯過轉彎標誌
                          錯過轉機
                                            野百合


Chinese Translation (Simplified)

错过转弯标志
                          错过转机
                                             野百合


Bio Sketch

Ellen Compton was an award-winning haiku poet with a background in visual and theatre arts. Her haiku  collection, Gathering Dusk, received a Snapshot Press Book Award. And she was an editor emerita of The Red Moon Anthology series and a founding member of Towpath. Ellen credited her childhood in the Ohio River Valley for her deep love of the natural world and for her awareness of its fragility. 

Monday, March 24, 2025

Special Feature: Selected Poems on 50,000 DEATHS in GAZA

(FYI: EuroNews, March 31: Bodies of 15 aid workers discovered in southern Gaza mass grave

And Haaretz, April 1UN Recovers 15 Aid Workers' Bodies in Gaza, Say Some Found Bound and Shot

Rescue teams say some victims had their hands tied and were shot at close range, suggesting they were executed.

Against the Drowning Noise of Other Words, LXI: "aid worker"

please bury me
with no casket, no prayers
face down, away
from this shrapnel-filled world:
the note in an aid worker's hand



My Dear Readers:


Against the Drowning Noise of Other Words, CLXX: "Gaza's are Humans?"

too much to ask YOU 
to see Gazans as humans? 
50, 000 deaths
silenced, forgotten, buried
under the weight of daily life

Haaretz, March 24: Announcement That Death Toll Surpassed 50,000 Didn't Faze Anyone, Not Even in Gaza

Even Gazans aren't preoccupied by the number of dead these days. They're busy with questions of day-to-day survival: Will Israeli attacks become as widespread as they were before the cease-fire? Will all of Gaza be reoccupied? And who will die today or tomorrow?


XVIII: "Rafah"

attacks on Rafah ...
will the sound of bombings 
echo, echoing
in the ears of the World
thousands of miles away



LXXXIX: "smeared sun"

anything new
under Gaza's smeared sun?
smoky rubble
beyond smoky rubble, and yet
again smoky rubble


Haaretz, March 23: Eyal Zamir Is the Israeli Army's First Kahanist Chief of Staff

Zamir even told Israel's ministers that he's capable of bringing about the complete destruction of Hamas' rule in Gaza and its military capabilities – or, in other words, the "total victory" Netanyahu promised.

Haaretz, March 23: Israeli Government Approves Bureau for 'Voluntary Emigration' of Palestinians From Gaza

Defense Minister Katz said the bureau will act to facilitate 'safe and supervised passage' of Gazans to target countries. Ministers also approved the separation of 13 neighborhoods in West Bank settlements, granting them independent settlement status


LXXVI: "Gaza's safe zone"

mule-drawn wagons
wind past one mound of rubble
after another ...
across the bottom of my screen
scrolls the text: from here to nowhere



CXIII: "preparing for settlement in Gaza"

each bombed-out house:
an album with no photos
but with people
living, wounded and dead
pressed between its pages


Haaretz, March 23: A Country That Dehumanizes Millions in Gaza Will Do the Same to Its Own People
Even if it's too late for tens of thousands of Palestinians who were killed, it's still possible to change our ways. This time, not just for the hostages – but to end the slaughter of our neighbors


To conclude today's Special Feature post, I would like to share with you the following poem excerpt :

In the dark times
Will there also be singing?
Yes, there will be singing
About the dark times.

-- Bertolt Brecht (tr. John Willett), "Motto", written during his exile in Denmark in the late 1930s. 


Added: Against the Drowning Noise of Other Words, CLXXI: "crowded shelter"

crowded shelter
layer within layer 
of hushed silence


FYI: Haaretz, March 27: In One of the Gaza War's Most Horrifying Nights, the Israeli Army Killed Nearly 300 Women and Children

the IDF and the Shin Bet focused this time on civilian and political targets and less on the military wing of Hamas.

Sunday, March 23, 2025

A Room of My Own: Man in Black Haiku

store windows barred shut
footsteps of a man in black
echoing mine

FYI: For more examples, see "To the Lighthouse: Haiku Noir"


Added:

in a blue suit
the "Great One" walked onto the ice 
near the US team’s bench
with a thumbs up ...
Gretzky statue smeared with poop

FYI: Maclean's, March 5: Goodbye to Gretzky

The cracks in Gretzky’s patriotism have been showing for years. In 2009, he was promoted to companion of the Order of Canada—the nation’s highest civilian honour—but he wouldn’t come home to accept it. “It’s just embarrassing,” Christopher McCreery, an expert on the Canadian honours system, said in 2018, after nearly a decade had passed and The Great One still claimed the honour. 


Added: Trump Empire, Inc., XI

Land of the Crazed --> USA
Canada <-- Home of the Brave
giant road sign
at the corner of the border
as flocks of geese fly north

FYI: This could be read as a prequel to the following:

in Toronto sunshine
with the scent of early spring
and freedom
two Americans meet and part:
one draft dodger, one Trump evader



Added: Trump Empire, Inc., XII

Uber ride home
a Trumpinator bobblehead
rattles on the dashboard

(FYI: Trumpinator bobblehead is a figurine of Donald Trump as the Terminator) 


Added: Trump Empire, Inc., XIII

fast-hitting snowstorm
as Trump enacts another round
of tariffs ...
to stay or to go, I muse
[yet this longing for Never Land]


Added: Trump Empire, Inc., XIV
inspired by The Atlantic, March 24: The Trump Administration "Accidentally" Texted Me Its War "Plans" 

supersized
FistStarsandStripesFire 👊 🇺🇸 🔥 ...
three emojis
and MAGAmoronsinsuits
love company in the spotlight


FYI: The Canadian Press, March 26: The Atlantic releases the entire Signal chat showing Hegseth's detailed attack plans against Houthis

The Independent, March 26: ‘It’s really not a big deal’: Trump responds to latest round texts published in Signal text scandal

And CNN, March 26: The politics of the Yemen chat scandal is obscuring key foreign policy shifts

Saturday, March 22, 2025

To the Lighthouse: A Rhetorical Device, Humor

Humor is a rhetorical device that writers use to induce laughter or amusement in their readers, or more seriously, to highlight societal flaws

This Brave New World, LXIV
written in response to Republican Governor Doug Ducey's end-of-term, 97-million-dollars gift to his beloved "Land of the Free"

mile after mile
of stacked shipping containers 
topped by razor wire
under the desert sun
this Border Wall of Hate | Fear



mindless culture wars

On the Brink of Trumperica, XIII

woke mind virus ...
this double-masked man mumbles
in the psych ward


(FYI:

‘woke’ just means you give a damn about other people...We must stay in community. We must help the vulnerable. We must find ways to project an inspiring vision of the future



political corruption, which is rampant in Trumpland (CREW (Citizens for Responsibility and Ethics in Washington) is tracking Trump’s unprecedented corruption (again), Feb. 3, 2025), 

On the Brink of Trumperica, XII

the people of Trump
                  by the people of Musk
                  for the people of the SuperRich ...
sun-bleached stars and stripes
atop the Capitol fencing



Or complete incompetence.

Between Heaven and Hell, VI

ka-kis-to-cracy ...
my English teacher's voice
quivering
as U-S-A! chants get louder
from the crowd outside the school


(FYI: The first part of the word comes from the Greek kákisto(s), meaning “worst.” So kakistocracy means “government by the worst.” The earliest known use of the word was in the 1600s by Paul Gosnold, a loyalist to King Charles I during the English Civil War.)


Now, what literary device is being used for humorous effect? Hyperbole is one of the commonly used devices with a focus, thematic or visual, on exaggeration for humorous effect, or the effective use of pun, irony, sarcasm, or the combination of these devices, can also achieve the same effect.

For example, see the titling, structure, political jargons, and "scientific fact " (as shown in the third haiku 😆) of the following haiku sequence:

Trump Empire, Inc., IX
written in response to Bob Newhart's claim: "Humor’s a weapon if you want to make it one"

Easy as 1-2-3 When Humor Bombs

MAGA bar brawl between Trump jokes a thunderous echo-fart

floodafterfloodoftariffstaxcutMARA
King Trump's Castro-length shit-words

raising chickens for eggs
since wave after wave of DOGE cuts
I fart so often

(FYI: The noun shit-word has been obsolete since its recorded usage only in the Middle English period (1150—1500) (shit-word entry, Oxford English Dictionary). Now, it's revived by King Trump.

DOGE stands for the "Department of Government Efficiency", and MARA for "Make America Rich Again."

And eggs contain sulfur, which can contribute to the sulfurous smell of gas.  😂)


To conclude today's post, I would like to share with you the following remarks:

Politicians and diapers must be changed often, and for the same reason.

-- Mark Twain

Politics is the gentle art of getting votes from the poor and campaign funds from the rich, by promising to protect each from the other.

-- Oscar Ameringer

One of the penalties for refusing to participate in politics is that you end up being governed by your inferiors.

-- Plato


Added: Trump Empire, Inc., X

wall-mounted TV
blasting Putin demands to keep
captured territories
as we buy stinky tofu ...
one adds, "including the White House"


FYI: Stinky tofu, also known as "chou doufu" in Chinese, is a fermented bean curd dish popular in China and Taiwan, known for its strong, pungent odor and unique flavor. 

Friday, March 21, 2025

Biting NOT Barking: Geese and Refugees Haiku by Ernest J. Berry

English Original

frosty morning
migrating geese
and refugees

Forgotten War, 2016

Ernest J. Berry


Chinese Translation (Traditional)

霜凍的早晨
遷徙的大雁
和難民

Chinese Translation (Simplified)

霜冻的早晨
迁徙的大雁
和难民


Bio Sketch

Ernest J. Berry was born in 1929 in Christchurch, New Zealand. After a decade of shepherding, he spent several years in business before retiring to a beach in Mexico where he rediscovered his boyhood love of poetry. He un-retired in 1993 and settled in Picton. After founding Picton Poets in 1994, he started teaching haiku in workshops, secondary schools  and haiku meetings. Two of his haiku books were honoured with Merit Book Awards from The Haiku Society of America. 

Thursday, March 20, 2025

Butterfly Dream: Carousel Haiku by Mohammad Azim Khan

English Original

tree shadows
ride the carousel
abandoned park

Modern Haiku, 50:3, Fall 2019

Mohammad Azim Khan


Chinese Translation (Traditional)

樹影
乘坐旋轉木馬
廢棄的公園

Chinese Translation (Simplified)

树影
乘坐旋转木马
废弃的公园


Bio Sketch

Mohammad Azim Khan is a retired UN official who has travelled to many war-torn countries to oversee relief and disaster operations. He graduated from Peshawar University with Master's degrees in both English Literature and Economics. He has since developed a special interest in haiku and tanka. And he has published many poems in journals around the world.

Wednesday, March 19, 2025

Poetic Musings:Israeli Settler & Gazan Boy Visual Tanka by Chen-ou Liu

Against the Drowning Noise of Other Words, CIII: "settler violence"

          under        slate-gray            skies

                                   |                          
a settler aims his gun | a boy throws his rock
                                   |

          tank track marks on the grass


Commentary: This is the first three-line visual tanka ever written, and its unusual format forces the reader to consider the relationships among Israeli incursions, as implied from L3,  in the occupied West Bank during the Gaza war. And the use of these vertical lines/slashes not only shows the "Apartheid Wall against Palestinians, a cruel system of domination and a crime against humanity" (Amnesty International, Feb. 1 2022), as indicated in L2, but also implies a World Apart between the occupiers/Israelis and the occupied people/Palestinians. 


Note: The "single vertical line" has become the standard format for tanka written by the Japanese poets since the latter half of the 19th century; However, Ishikawa Takuboku, author of Poems to Eat and Romaji Diary and Sad Toys,  advocated for and started writing two or three lines, depending on the rhythm of each tanka. For more, see Hiroaki Sato, “Lineation of Tanka in English Translation,” 42 Monumenta Nipponica 3:347-56, Autumn 1987.


FYI: The following could be read as its sequel:
Against the Drowning Noise of Other Words, CLXVI: "military watch"

burning olive groves ...
the weight of thick gray and black
blanketing
over the West Bank families
under military watch


And UN Press Release, March 18: Israel ramps up settlement and annexation in West Bank with dire human rights consequences

Covering the period from 1 November 2023 to 31 October 2024, the report details significant expansion of Israeli settlements in the occupied West Bank, including East Jerusalem. Steps have been taken towards implementing plans to construct over 20,000 housing units in new or existing Israeli settlements in East Jerusalem alone, according to Israeli non-governmental organisations, while 214 Palestinian properties and structures have been demolished in East Jerusalem. Over 10,300 units within existing Israeli settlements in the rest of the West Bank are in the pipeline and an unprecedented 49 new Israeli outposts have been established.


And Against the Drowning Noise of Other Words, CLXVII: "pre-dawn bombings"
written in response to The Canadian Press, March 18: Israel's surprise bombardment plunged Palestinians back into 'hell'

By midday, over 400 people had been killed. It was one of the deadliest days of the 17-month war, following two months of ceasefire.


pre-dawn bombings
light the sky with orange flares 
shatter the stillness 
set fire to a sprawling tent camp ...
sounds of Death in a child's eyes


FYI: "Israel's oldest daily, now sanctioned by Netanyahu, the WarCriminal , Haaretz," Editorial, March 19: Israel, Not Hamas, Is Derailing the Gaza Cease-fire and Preventing the Hostages' Return

The Irish News, March 18: Netanyahu says strikes across Gaza that killed hundreds ‘only the beginning’ And Al Jazeera, March 19: Israel’s renewed strikes on Gaza have killed 183 children


The IDF announced it has begun a ground offensive in northern Gaza. The White House said that President Trump "fully supports" Israel's recent actions in Gaza. Over 710 Gazans have been killed and 900 wounded in Israeli strikes in the last 48 hours, the spokesperson of a hospital in central Gaza told Al Arabiya News.

And Haaretz, Analysis, March 21:  Israel Is Preparing to Occupy Gaza, Reinstate Military Rule and Fully Control the Palestinian Population

Israel appears to be creating a smokescreen around the government and army's true intentions. While awaiting updates on talks with Hamas, preparations are underway for a major operation to occupy Gaza


Added: Against the Drowning Noise of Other Words, CLXVIII: "bomb after bomb"

some sleep, some prepare 
for another Ramadan fast ...
bomb after bomb 
silencing all things under the roofs 
and inside makeshift tents


Added: Against the Drowning Noise of Other Words, CLXIX: "inverted red triangle"

police phalanx on campus ...
with his face painted
with the inverted red triangle
he shouts, I need no mask; I speak
from my difference


FYI: Red triangle (Palestinian symbol), Wikipedia: Since the Israeli invasion of the Gaza Strip, an inverted red triangle has been used by pro-Palestinian protesters.[1] The red triangle as a Palestinian symbol dates back to the 1917 Arab Revolt, after which it was also used in the Palestinian flag...